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19th November 2004, 05:30 PM
Like autumn leaves
His sense fell from him
An empty glass of himself
Shattered somewhere within
His thoughts like a hundred moths
Trapped in a lampshade
Somewhere within
Their wings banging and burning
On through endless nights
Forever awake he lies shaking and starving
Praying for someone to turn off the light


Taffy aka SuzieQ
19th November 2004, 05:32 PM
Wow Rein that is so cool :)
Y the sad face hunny you ok? :( Heres a couple of hugs for you graemlins/friends.gif graemlins/friends.gif
Big love me graemlins/friends.gif graemlins/love.gif graemlins/kiss.gif

19th November 2004, 05:34 PM
yeah...but sorry i wish i could write like that! someone else wrote it!

thanks for the hug though....appreciate it! :)

19th November 2004, 05:41 PM
Aww Rein whats wrong graemlins/love.gif graemlins/kiss.gif

19th November 2004, 05:41 PM
don't know? :) :)

Taffy aka SuzieQ
19th November 2004, 05:42 PM
Your welcome Rein wish i could find a poem as beautiful as that graemlins/friends.gif graemlins/kiss.gif graemlins/love.gif

20th November 2004, 09:44 AM
that is lovely
snother hug at you hun graemlins/friends.gif

20th November 2004, 12:14 PM
graemlins/friends.gif and from me graemlins/friends.gif
love jx

20th November 2004, 12:58 PM

19th December 2004, 12:57 AM
god love rage against the machine. rein, have you read zack's poem? its as beautiful, if not more than his lyrics. you can find it here if you havent read it:

Land and Liberty - Zack De La Rocha (http://noshelter.s5.com/words/land&liberty.htm)

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19th December 2004, 04:56 AM
Nice poem :)

And welcome to the BB RATM4483!!!

graemlins/love.gif Jolene